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Thứ Bảy, 5 tháng 12, 2009

TOPIC 5:THE LIFE STYLE OF YOUNG GENERATION

In 2000-2006, according to statistic, there are 95.103 children and minors committed 74.389 cases. In 2005-2008, breaking the law of pupils and student is more than 8.000 cases. In there, disturbing public odder and drug-related crimes are 815 cases; killing is 8 cases; robbing fortune, injuring life and health are 117 cases. These terrible numbers make many people think that: “nowadays young generation is worse style than in the past.” In my opinion, I agree completely with that idea.
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Many people say that: “the more modern our society is, the more young generation’s lifestyle is depraved.” The rate crime between the ages of 18 and 30 is about 40%. This is consequence of lifestyle relying on others, depending on parents, selfishness, not being aware of their responsibly. They not only are work-shy but also demanding to be served and come in for. If their parents don’t satisfy their claims, they leave the home, and meet bad friends. Some young people stole their parents’ fortune, or others to play the whore, to be stylish, to gamble, and use drugs. They answer back their parents because they think they right, and their parents have old-fashioned ideas.

In addition, there are more than 20.000 teenagers to leave school in Viet Nam. They tramp the streets and lead the life like dust. Living without parents’ care and education makes young people fall into drug addiction, into alcoholism, and make crimes easier. Furthermore, young people use internet for unhealthy purposes such as: watching video nasty, join in black wed, play violent games. Recently, many young people have argued that they use internet to find out useful information, to leant, to open their mind. This may be true; however, it’s true for a few young people who are well-education, and has wealthy lifestyle. If we enter any internet shop we can see the truth. The young playing violent games: 50%, chatting: 25%, entertaining by others ways (listening music, writing blog, etc): 15%, and only 10% for learning, reading news.

Lifestyle of young generation is a hot problem today. How to improve good style and remove bad style of young generation is a big hard question? Thus, right now all of us, young people must consider and evaluate our own behavior. That’s the duty of all society and every people.

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