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Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

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1. Introductory:

Since the creation of the world, human being had a strong attachment to nature. Nowadays, although we live in concrete-houses which are fitted with all modern conveniences such as: condition-air, cooker, and microwave oven, etc, we can’t live without grass cover, water, trees, air. Thus, in my opinion, nature is my best friend, your best friend, everybody’s friend.

2. Body:
• Paragraph 1: Nature brings to us a lot of benefits about material.
+Nature is wood: forest product, prevent flood waters, make the climate equable, and give fresh air.
+Sea which supplies precious seafood, pearl, coral, salt, and air-conditions, and is an important line of communication.
+Nature is land for people to live and work, and water, air, mine of metal.

• Paragraph 2: Nature is the most valuable spiritual of human being because nature always brings to people extremely cheery feeling.
+ Enjoy the view of sunrise or sunset on sea surface or from mountain top.
+Enjoy the beauty of yellow moonlight, and come and go freely under the moonlight.
+Nature is famous landscape, tourist attractions where we travel, rest, entertain at weekend.

3. Conclusion:
None can deny the important role of nature in the life of human. Nature not only brings to us material but also spiritual like a good friend, and love, protect people like own children. For this reason, we must protect nature as protect our environment.







NATURE IS OUR BEST FRIEND



Since the creation of the world, human being had a strong attachment to nature. Nowadays, although we live in concrete-houses which are fitted with all modern conveniences such as: condition-air, cooker, and microwave oven, etc, we can’t live without grass cover, water, trees, air. Thus, in my opinion, nature is my best friend, your best friend, everybody’s friend.


Nature brings to us a lot of benefits about material. It crates good condition for us to exist, and improve. Nature is wood which supplies forest product, prevents flood waters, makes the climate equable, gives us fresh air. Wood is the lungs of earth so wood called gold. And silver is sea which supplies precious seafood, pearl, coral, and salt. Sea also air-conditions. It is an important line of communication connecting from east to west, from north to south. Nature is land for people to live and work. We plant, farm, and breed on cultivated land to make food for our life. Nature is water, air, mine of metal which we use everyday. Nature supplies for us all material to raise the living standard.


In addition, nature is the most valuable spiritual of human being because nature always brings to people extremely cheery feeling. Is there anything more interesting than enjoying the view of sunrise or sunset on sea surface or from mountain top? At that time, nature is a picture with miraculously wonderful lines and colors which no painter can draw. Nature is nights of mid-autumn festival for adult to dink a cup of tea, and enjoy the beauty of yellow moonlight, for children to come and go freely under the moonlight. Whenever we get street, we want to go peaceful place with nice and tranquil nature. Nature is famous landscape, tourist attractions where we travel, rest, entertain at weekend. Even with all benefits of nature, some people say that nature causes blood, drought, storm, and earthquake. However, these evidences don’t mean that nature brings to our life harmful and bad things. It simply shows that how people destroyed nature, and how people made environment polluted.


None can deny the important role of nature in the life of human. Nature not only brings to us material but also spiritual like a good friend, and love, protect people like own children. For this reason, we must protect nature as protect our environment.

2 nhận xét:

  1. +ideas,unity,development: good.
    +in the second body paragraph, I think it's better if you say " forest is the lung of the earth so forest is called is gold".

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  2. INTRODUCTION (2ms)
    - Background, hook 1
    - Thesis statement 1
    BODY (4.5ms)
    - Good ideas 2
    - Coherence, unity, development 1.5
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (0.5)
    CONCLUSION (2ms)
    - Summarize (1)
    - Lesson, suggestions (1)
    Total: 8

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